[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #43933: Make the Privacy Policy page intro text shorter and more friendly

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#43933: Make the Privacy Policy page intro text shorter and more friendly
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 Reporter:  iandunn         |      Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement     |     Status:  new
 Priority:  normal          |  Milestone:  4.9.7
Component:  Administration  |    Version:
 Severity:  normal          |   Keywords:  gdpr
  Focuses:                  |
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 #43435 introduced the `Privacy Policy page` screen, which includes some
 intro text, intended to educate the user about their potential legal
 obligations, and some best practices for implementing and maintaining a
 privacy policy.

 In the rush for the 4.9.6 string freeze, there wasn't enough time to fully
 discuss and iterate on the text, so I think it may be beneficial to
 continue the conversation.

 Most recent discussion:

 https://wordpress.slack.com/archives/C9695RJBW/p1525273783000517
 https://wordpress.slack.com/archives/C9695RJBW/p1525274779000367

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