[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #52970: Improve text in help tabs of Personal Data Exporter/Eraser

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#52970: Improve text in help tabs of Personal Data Exporter/Eraser
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 Reporter:  dimadin                              |       Owner:  marybaum
     Type:  defect (bug)                         |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  normal                               |   Milestone:  5.9
Component:  Help/About                           |     Version:
 Severity:  normal                               |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch needs-testing needs-       |     Focuses:  privacy,
  screenshots                                    |  ui-copy
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Comment (by paapst):

 Hi @marybaum In your recent patch you have deleted:
 ''Providing an export of all data that a business or website has collected
 about an individual is a requirement of many Privacy Laws around the
 world, and is sometimes referred to as the "Right To Data Portability".'''

 and replaced this by:

 ''Privacy Laws around the world require businesses and online services to
 delete, anonymize, or forget all the data they collect about an
 individual. The rights those laws enshrine are sometimes called the "Right
 of Data Portability".'''

 I understand from the bug scrub that this has been done to create an
 active construction.
 However, from a legal point of view, the currently proposed text is not
 correct. If you want to use an active construction on that particular
 place, it should be something like this:

 ''Privacy Laws around the world require businesses and online services to
 **provide an export of some of the** data they collect about an
 individual. The rights those laws enshrine are sometimes called the "Right
 of Data Portability".'''

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