[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #54270: About Page for 5.9 Release

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#54270: About Page for 5.9 Release
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 Reporter:  chanthaboune    |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  task (blessed)  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal          |   Milestone:  5.9
Component:  Help/About      |     Version:
 Severity:  normal          |  Resolution:
 Keywords:                  |     Focuses:
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Comment (by anjanavasan):

 Replying to [comment:2 webcommsat]:
 > Following bug scrub on the About Page/ Help component.
 > Adding a link to a [draft Google
 document][https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mGe-
 LJjSbJVbbiaDP7VQpg8MN4FZI1pIcX2O-qAdJ3U/edit?usp=sharing] where reference
 material can be added to support the marcomms for the About Page for 5.9.
 >
 > The draft for copy can be started in this document when ready too.
 >
 > Document in the Marketing Drive releases folder.

 I've offered relatively minor suggestions to improve the flow of the draft
 and enhance readability. I mostly just rearranged the sentences and edited
 the subheads/body to highlight the benefit and put the reader first. Hope
 it helps!

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