[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #51098: Twenty Twenty: Add Block Patterns

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#51098: Twenty Twenty: Add Block Patterns
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 Reporter:  melchoyce                    |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  task (blessed)               |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                       |   Milestone:  5.6
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 Severity:  normal                       |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch needs-copy-review  |     Focuses:
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Comment (by bridgetwillard):

 I'm happy to make suggestions on the copy in 51098.diff, @melchoyce &
 @helen.

 I agree with @jffng on the em dash versus two hyphens. It should be an em
 dash.

 == Suggested Edit ==

 'Support the Museum and Get Exclusive Offers'

 Currently says: 'Become a Member and Get Exclusive Offers' (line 36)

 == Suggested Edit ==
 'Become a Member'

 Currently says: 'Join the Club.' (line 36)

 == Suggested Edit ==

 'Award-winning exhibitions featuring internationally-renowned artists.'

 Internationally-renowned implies they are from all over the world.

 Currently says: 'Award-winning exhibitions featuring internationally-
 renowned artists from all over the world.' (line 47)

 == Suggested Edit ==

 'An awe-inspiring collection of books, prints, and gifts from our
 exhibitions.'

 Currently says: 'An awe-inspiring collection of books, prints, and
 miscellaneous items from our exhibitions.', (line 47)

 == Suggested Edit ==

 'Shop Now'

 Currently says: 'Read More' (line 47)

 == Suggested Edit ==

 (This h2 should be forced into two and use Title Case.)

 <h2>'The Premier Destination for Modern Art in Sweden.'</h2>
 <h2>'Open 10 AM to 6 PM every day during winter.'</h2>

 Currently says: 'The premier destination for modern art in Sweden. Open 10
 AM → 6 PM every day during winter.' (line 80)

 == Suggested Edit ==

 'With seven floors of striking architecture, UMoMA shows exhibitions of
 international contemporary art, sometimes along with art historical
 retrospectives. Existential, political, and philosophical issues are
 intrinsic to our program. As visitor, you are invited to guided tours
 artist talks, lectures, film screenings, and other events with free
 admission.'

 (Added oxford comma and US spelling for "program."

 Currently says: 'With seven floors of striking architecture, UMoMA shows
 exhibitions of international contemporary art, sometimes along with art
 historical retrospectives. Existential, political and philosophical issues
 are intrinsic to our programme. As visitor you are invited to guided tours
 artist talks, lectures, film screenings and other events with free
 admission.' (line 80)

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