[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #45395: About: Update Privacy page to include illustration

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#45395: About: Update Privacy page to include illustration
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 Reporter:  melchoyce                |       Owner:  garrett-eclipse
     Type:  enhancement              |      Status:  accepted
 Priority:  normal                   |   Milestone:  5.6
Component:  Help/About               |     Version:
 Severity:  normal                   |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch needs-design-  |     Focuses:  administration,
  feedback needs-meta-cdn            |  privacy
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Changes (by garrett-eclipse):

 * keywords:  has-patch needs-testing => has-patch needs-design-feedback
     needs-meta-cdn
 * status:  reviewing => accepted


Comment:

 Thanks for the refresh @hareesh-pillai I've cleaned it up a little in
 [https://core.trac.wordpress.org/attachment/ticket/45395/45395.2.diff
 45395.2.diff] as we don't need to have it in a separate
 .about_section.column, as well I felt the HR unneeded as it added
 unnecessary space.

 Replying to [comment:7 Hareesh Pillai]:
 > Aside: I noticed a
 [https://wordpress.slack.com/archives/C9695RJBW/p1542826580417400 Slack
 comment] in reference to a phrase in this page - particularly this part
 “From time to time, your WordPress site may send data to WordPress.org…”
 >
 > {{{
 > I guess “may send” should be “sends”?
 > }}}
 >
 >
 > I think we could evaluate this change as part of this ticket.
 Reviewing this `may send` is valid as you can block those requests on your
 instance so `may` is more accurate.

 Marking this for final design review, @melchoyce would you like to do the
 honours?
 Once happy with the final image we'll just need to open a meta ticket to
 have it uploaded to the CDN.

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