[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #49295: 5.4 about page

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#49295: 5.4 about page
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 Reporter:  karmatosed               |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  task (blessed)           |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                   |   Milestone:  5.4
Component:  Help/About               |     Version:
 Severity:  normal                   |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  needs-design has-patch   |     Focuses:  ui, accessibility,
  needs-refresh                      |  administration
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Comment (by garrett-eclipse):

 Hello, reviewing the content in full can I make some minor amendments?
 Uploaded
 [https://core.trac.wordpress.org/attachment/ticket/49295/49295.2.diff
 49295.2.diff] to suggest minor changes to the privacy strings.

 1. Location data from the community events widget was also included with
 session tokens and is probably more important to the privacy focused user.
 2. Stating 'see where you are' is a little ambiguous as it could mean
 where you are on the page, in the site or otherwise. So I feel it's more
 informative to indicate you'll 'See progress as you process requests'
 3. If we're going to capitalize Privacy Tools we should capitalize both
 instances.

 Thanks

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