[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #50268: Improve the plugin/theme auto-update emails
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Wed Jun 3 20:53:37 UTC 2020
#50268: Improve the plugin/theme auto-update emails
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Reporter: desrosj | Owner: audrasjb
Type: enhancement | Status: accepted
Priority: normal | Milestone: 5.5
Component: Upgrade/Install | Version: trunk
Severity: normal | Resolution:
Keywords: needs-copy-review has-patch needs- | Focuses: ui-copy
testing |
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Comment (by paaljoachim):
In general the wording can be improved. It should also be shorter.
Some adjustments.
Please remove the word: "Howdy!"
It has always sounded like slang and as I have also read comments over
time from various people who feels that it is unprofessional.
For instance it's to it is.
Please check out your site now. = Please check your site now.
Remove:
To manage plugins on your site, visit the Plugins page: http://site.test
/wp-admin/plugins.php
To manage themes on your site, visit the Themes page: http://site.test/wp-
admin/themes.php
(This information is really not needed in the e-mail.)
Adjusting:
Please check your site now. It is possible that everything is working. If
it says you need to update, you should do so.
=
Check your site for any errors and follow any messages. Update the site if
needed.
Adjusting:
If you experience any issues or need support, the volunteers in the
WordPress.org support forums may be able to help.
https://wordpress.org/support/forums/
(Too many words.)
Adjust to:
For support go to/visit https://wordpress.org/support/forums/
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New suggestion.
The check your site sentence still needs work.
{{{
Failures occurred when attempting to update plugins and themes on your
site at http://site.test.
Check your site for any errors and follow any messages. Update the site if
needed.
The following plugins failed to update:
- Classic Editor
The following themes were successfully updated:
- Twenty Twenty
For support go to https://wordpress.org/support/forums/
The WordPress Team
}}}
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Ticket URL: <https://core.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/50268#comment:9>
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