[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #48716: Improve wording for PHP update warning // Part 2

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#48716: Improve wording for PHP update warning // Part 2
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 Reporter:  grafruessel                  |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement                  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                       |   Milestone:  Awaiting Review
Component:  Site Health                  |     Version:
 Severity:  normal                       |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  2nd-opinion has-copy-review  |     Focuses:  ui-copy
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Comment (by garrett-eclipse):

 Thanks for the input @marybaum I've uploaded a screenshot to illustrate
 where the string will be placed as it's a heading on an accordion and as
 such has limited space on mobile so would like to avoid rolling onto two
 lines.

 Also the additional context information about recommended version and
 security and speed is all present within the contents of the accordion and
 as such I feel can be avoided in the heading.

 With that in mind I feel a combination of the original recommendation and
 the verbiage you provided would make sense and be succinct;
 Your site is running the current version of PHP (%s)
 Your site is running an outdated version of PHP (%s)
 Your site is running an outdated version of PHP (%s) and should be updated
 Your site is running an outdated version of PHP (%s) and requires an
 update

 Thoughts?

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