[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #48716: Improve wording for PHP update warning // Part 2

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#48716: Improve wording for PHP update warning // Part 2
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 Reporter:  grafruessel  |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal       |   Milestone:  Awaiting Review
Component:  Site Health  |     Version:
 Severity:  normal       |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  2nd-opinion  |     Focuses:  ui-copy
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Comment (by garrett-eclipse):

 Thanks @sathyapulse & @wpgurudev for the patches.

 Both `Your version of PHP (%s)` and `Your PHP version (%s)` are valid so I
 don't have much preference there. I find `Your version of PHP (%s)` to be
 more friendly verbiage.

 In [https://core.trac.wordpress.org/attachment/ticket/48716/48716.diff
 48716.diff] we're missing the `and` in the sentence there.

 Going to CC @marybaum as she was the wordsmith participating in the
 original decision.

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