[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #47644: Improve wording for PHP update warning in Site Health

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#47644: Improve wording for PHP update warning in Site Health
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 Reporter:  danieltj                                 |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement                              |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                                   |   Milestone:  5.3
Component:  Site Health                              |     Version:  5.2
 Severity:  minor                                    |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch 2nd-opinion needs-copy-review  |     Focuses:
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Changes (by garrett-eclipse):

 * keywords:  has-patch 2nd-opinion => has-patch 2nd-opinion needs-copy-
               review


Comment:

 Replying to [comment:15 danieltj]:
 > For what it's worth I don't think the version must be in the title,
 although it would add some consistency compared to other checks that are
 made which have versions in them.
 >
 > I do think usage on the word 'we' needs to go though and the versions
 need to be included somewhere to say what you have and what you need to
 update to.

 Thanks for the input @danieltj looking at other checks I see what you mean
 about version in the title as that's in the WP version check, on my up to
 date install it states `Your WordPress version is up to date (5.2.2)`. I'm
 also with you on dropping the 'we' and agree we need to include what
 version someone is on and what they need to update too most likely in the
 description.

 Adding 'needs-copy-review' to get thoughts on the use of 'we' and suggest
 copy for the description portion of the check.

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Ticket URL: <https://core.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/47644#comment:16>
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