[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #46946: Site Health: Text adjustment (add a link and remove "we")

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#46946: Site Health: Text adjustment (add a link and remove "we")
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 Reporter:  birgire                |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement            |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                 |   Milestone:  5.3
Component:  Text Changes           |     Version:  trunk
 Severity:  normal                 |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  site-health has-patch  |     Focuses:
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Comment (by birgire):

 Thanks @mukesh27 and @subrataemfluence for the patches.


 In [attachment:"46946.diff"] does the part:

 > If any improvement needed then it will show on the ...

 need an "is" after the "improvement" ? (I'm not a native English speaker).

 Regarding the link in In [attachment:"46946-2.diff"], I would suggest
 using:

 {{{
 esc_url( admin_url( 'site-health.php' ) )

 }}}

 instead of

 {{{
 esc_url( admin_url()  . 'site-health.php' )
 }}}

 to e.g. make the path accessible in the {{{admin_url}}} filter.

 > Also a related thought (since the text link was suggested). As the page
 can turn into a long one when all or some sections are expanded, how about
 adding the same link at the bottom of the page?

 Thanks for  the suggestion on @subrataemfluence. Maybe this consideration
 would be better focused in a possible new ticket? I guess other admin
 pages will reuse this design in the future. How to help navigate long
 pages, in this new design, is a good question.

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