[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #43933: Make the Privacy Policy page intro text shorter and more friendly

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#43933: Make the Privacy Policy page intro text shorter and more friendly
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 Reporter:  iandunn           |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement       |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal            |   Milestone:  4.9.6
Component:  Administration    |     Version:
 Severity:  normal            |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  gdpr needs-patch  |     Focuses:
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Comment (by allendav):

 I prefer the wording as it stands today, plus @macbookandrew 's
 improvements. I think we should not softpedal the new responsibilities of
 web site ownership any more than we already have.

 Wording as it stands today:

 {{{
 As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international
 privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy
 policy. If you already have a privacy policy page, please select it below.
 If not, create one.

 The new page will include help and suggestions for your privacy policy.
 However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to
 provide the information that your privacy policy requires, and to keep
 that information current and accurate.

 After your privacy policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it. On the
 edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by
 your themes and plugins. We would also suggest reviewing your privacy
 policy from time to time, especially after an update. There may be changes
 or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.
 }}}

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