[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #43865: Privacy Policy Tools Page: Improve readability

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#43865: Privacy Policy Tools Page: Improve readability
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 Reporter:  birgire                              |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement                          |      Status:  new
 Priority:  low                                  |   Milestone:  Awaiting
                                                 |  Review
Component:  Administration                       |     Version:  trunk
 Severity:  minor                                |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  gdpr has-screenshots ui-feedback     |     Focuses:  ui,
  has-patch needs-testing                        |  administration
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Comment (by xkon):

 I'm still not sure if adding a `max-width` would make much of a
 difference, especially on big screens.

 I personally prefer the `<p>` idea of @birgire even though still they are
 'lenghty' dividing them makes it easier to follow and we don't go off the
 way the admin area works.

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 [attachment:43865.diff]

 - changes `Privacy Policy` to `Privacy Notice`
 - changes the menu link to `Privacy Notice Page` - there is no reason
 having it as `Privacy` since the tools got divided into their own pages.
 - Removes the false title `Privacy Tools` - the only thing in this page is
 the Page Creation so that title doesn't make sense any more imho.
 - Removes the `<hr>`
 - Adds the new text from
 https://core.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/43435#comment:65
 - Adds extra `<p>` on text for readability.

 @webdevlaw can you confirm this from the preview of [attachment:43865.jpg]
 ?

 Also on an extra note below are more changes that you requested ( I'm
 transfering theme here for ease of use ). I skiped these as this page has
 nothing to do with 'Privacy Tools' anymore as the only thing it does is
 the Privacy Policy select/create option, and that is confusing. We could
 add those into each individual page that fits ( Export / Delete etc ).

 {{{
 Change: This page provides tools with which you can manage your user\'s
 personal data and site\'s privacy policy.'

 To:

 This page provides tools to help you manage your site's privacy settings
 and compliance requirements.

 The privacy notice tool will help you to draft a privacy notice that meets
 European data protection law requirements.

 The personal data tool will allow your European users to request and
 export a copy of their personal data.
 }}}


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 Do we have anything to add on the `Help` above? FYI the Export Data /
 Delete Data tools don't have any Help API set at the moment. So we should
 either add something on all off them that is about each respective page or
 remove it for now imho. There's no point of having double content atm.

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