[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #40721: 4.8 About Page

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#40721: 4.8 About Page
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 Reporter:  melchoyce       |       Owner:  melchoyce
     Type:  task (blessed)  |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  normal          |   Milestone:  4.8
Component:  Help/About      |     Version:
 Severity:  normal          |  Resolution:
 Keywords:                  |     Focuses:
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Comment (by voldemortensen):

 Small inconsistency I see:

 > A welcome video is a great way to humanize the branding of your website.
 You can now add any video from the Media Library to a sidebar on your site
 with the new Video Widget.

 > Are you a podcaster, musician, or avid blogger? Adding a widget with
 your audio file has never been easier. Upload your audio file to the media
 library, go to the widget settings, select your file, and you’re
 ready for listeners.

 In first, it says the "Media Library", but in the second, the "media
 library". Following convention in other sections I think the second should
 be capitalized.

 > Or you edit the text in the link, but it ends up outside of it.

 This sentence seems a bit weird to me. The text references two "it"s. Its
 hard to tell which it is it.

 > Now you can easily find your local events just by logging in to your
 dashboard and looking at the new Events and News widget.

 In other places that specific, singular widgets are mentioned, "widget"
 has been capitalized.

 That's all that I see so far. Great work! I know About pages are hard :)

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