[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #34663: 4.4 About Page

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#34663: 4.4 About Page
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 Reporter:  wonderboymusic  |       Owner:
     Type:  task (blessed)  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal          |   Milestone:  4.4
Component:  Help/About      |     Version:  trunk
 Severity:  normal          |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch       |     Focuses:
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Comment (by helen):

 * I don't think we should keep that array of under the hood features to be
 printed out later, let's just move it back into HTML since it's not being
 randomized anymore.
 * Force the two separate REST API paragraphs to each be in a column.
 Having one line of the second one in the first column is awkward.
 * There are at least 2 too many exclamation points. Both sentences in
 "WordPress embeds" end that way.
 * Title casing is inconsistent. Which way do we go?
 * May be better to specify that that interacting with those new objects is
 more predictable/intuitive *in code*. For a user skimming the page, if
 your eye catches on comments/networks being more intuitive, that's a false
 statement.
 * Responsive images paragraph doesn't feel right to me. Multiple images
 aren't provided based on screen/device, a different one is chosen from
 multiple. The semicolon is weird in that it's not clear that the two
 halves of the sentence relate in terms of differences noticed, perhaps
 better just as an `, and`. I also think it's worth noting that you will
 also reap those benefits as you visit all those other WordPress sites
 around the web, rather than "so why are you telling me this if I'm not
 going to notice anything".
 * This was noted to me already, but Cloudup is not camelcased.
 * I know the Cloudup embed is meant to be temporary, but I think generally
 I would be wary of appearing to promote an Automattic thing more
 prominently than others. It's certainly not the intent nor is that a
 blocker, just want to keep that in mind as we choose an actual embed.

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