[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #22451: 3.5 Help text changes and improvements

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#22451: 3.5 Help text changes and improvements
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 Reporter:  DrewAPicture     |       Owner:  DrewAPicture
     Type:  defect (bug)     |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  normal           |   Milestone:  3.5
Component:  Help/About       |     Version:  trunk
 Severity:  normal           |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  audit has-patch  |
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Comment (by DrewAPicture):

 Replying to [comment:13 nacin]:
 > Otherwise, it feels a bit too formal, like we're a Terms of Service
 ("the Company") or an up-tight technical manual.

 Can you be a little more specific about what you're referring to as
 "formal"? I've only introduced about 5 new strings, most of the procedural
 stuff was already there.

 Here's what's already on my radar:

 * The oEmbed string in edit-form-advnaced is a bit much. That's getting
 chopped and/or tacked on to Add Media.
 * The new DFW string (also edit-form-advanced) was all part of a veritable
 paragraph on the Post Editor that I broke into two pieces. I'll look at
 making it simpler and pointing out to Codex for more info.
 * There's a big procedural set of instructions in theme-editor that was
 already there. All that was fixed there was proper string concatenation.

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