[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #14973: Improve the string for the default About page

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#14973: Improve the string for the default About page
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 Reporter:  nacin         |       Owner:     
     Type:  defect (bug)  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal        |   Milestone:  3.1
Component:  UI            |     Version:     
 Severity:  normal        |    Keywords:     
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 The comma splice may be fixed [15670], but the rest of the string is still
 all over the map:

   This is an example of a WordPress page. You could edit this to put
 information about yourself or your site so readers know where you are
 coming from. You can create as many pages like this one or sub-pages as
 you like and manage all of your content inside of WordPress.

 if we're just going to fix grammar and poor parallelism, here's an
 attempt:

   This is an example of a WordPress page. You could edit this to put
 information about yourself or your site so readers know where you are
 coming from. You can create as many pages as you like and manage all of
 your content inside of WordPress.

 A bit more modifications:

   This is an example of a WordPress page. You could edit this to put
 information about yourself or your site so readers know who you are. You
 can manage your content inside of WordPress by creating as many pages as
 you'd like.

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