[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #11008: Improve copy of first post to provide useful info and tips

[WordPress Trac]

#11008: Improve copy of first post to provide useful info and tips
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 Reporter:  demetris     |       Owner:                       
     Type:  enhancement  |      Status:  new                  
 Priority:  normal       |   Milestone:  2.9                  
Component:  General      |     Version:  2.9                  
 Severity:  normal       |    Keywords:  has-patch 2nd-opinion
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Comment(by filosofo):

 Looks good!  Thanks for considering my suggestions.  Just one more niggle,
 please:

 "Upgrading only takes a couple of clicks!"

 should be

 "Upgrading takes only a couple of clicks!"

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