[wp-meta] [Making WordPress.org] #4585: Cookie Policy - Add link to Privacy Policy & rework initial verbiage

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#4585: Cookie Policy - Add link to Privacy Policy & rework initial verbiage
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 Reporter:  garrett-eclipse  |      Owner:  (none)
     Type:  enhancement      |     Status:  new
 Priority:  normal           |  Milestone:
Component:  General          |   Keywords:
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 Hello,

 The initial paragraph of the Cookie Policy could use a link to the Privacy
 Policy on the `Privacy Policy` text. As well I found it confusing as it
 starts talking about the Privacy Policy and follows by saying 'this
 policy' which can be confusing as it's referring to the Cookie Policy but
 is found after the Privacy Policy is raised.

 Original;
 >Our Privacy Policy explains our principles when it comes to the
 collection, processing, and storage of your information. This policy
 specifically explains how we, our partners, and users of our services
 deploy cookies, as well as the options you have to control them.

 Suggested;
 > This policy specifically explains how we, our partners, and users of our
 services deploy cookies, as well as the options you have to control them.
 <a href="%s">Our Privacy Policy</a> explains our principles when it comes
 to the collection, processing, and storage of your information.

 Adding a patch to correct this.

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Ticket URL: <https://meta.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/4585>
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