[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #47644: Improve wording for PHP update warning in Site Health

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#47644: Improve wording for PHP update warning in Site Health
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 Reporter:  danieltj                             |       Owner:  marybaum
     Type:  enhancement                          |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  normal                               |   Milestone:  5.3
Component:  Site Health                          |     Version:  5.2
 Severity:  minor                                |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch 2nd-opinion needs-copy-    |     Focuses:
  review                                         |
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Comment (by marybaum):

 I do agree we should use the version names, and we can be a little more
 direct to get around the We issue:

 You're running version 5.2.x, which is outdated and could make your site
 vulnerable. Please update to 5.3 for a faster, more secure site -- and
 some great new features!

 Replying to [comment:16 garrett-eclipse]:
 > Replying to [comment:15 danieltj]:
 > > For what it's worth I don't think the version must be in the title,
 although it would add some consistency compared to other checks that are
 made which have versions in them.
 > >
 > > I do think usage on the word 'we' needs to go though and the versions
 need to be included somewhere to say what you have and what you need to
 update to.
 >
 > Thanks for the input @danieltj looking at other checks I see what you
 mean about version in the title as that's in the WP version check, on my
 up to date install it states `Your WordPress version is up to date
 (5.2.2)`. I'm also with you on dropping the 'we' and agree we need to
 include what version someone is on and what they need to update too most
 likely in the description.
 >
 > Adding 'needs-copy-review' to get thoughts on the use of 'we' and
 suggest copy for the description portion of the check.

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