[wp-trac] Re: [WordPress Trac] #7176: Grammar in Gears Enabled Dialog

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#7176: Grammar in Gears Enabled Dialog
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 Reporter:  Speedboxer      |        Owner:  westi   
     Type:  enhancement     |       Status:  assigned
 Priority:  low             |    Milestone:  2.7     
Component:  Administration  |      Version:  2.6     
 Severity:  minor           |   Resolution:          
 Keywords:  has-patch       |  
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Comment (by caesarsgrunt):

 I like most of the changes, but I'm not sure about[[BR]]
 '''However, if this is a public or shared computer, Gears should not be
 enabled.'''

 I don't really like the commas there - those could be parenthetical
 commas, setting off an unessential part of the sentence. Perhaps[[BR]]
 '''However, if this is a public or shared computer Gears should not be
 enabled.'''[[BR]]
 or even[[BR]]
 '''However, Gears should not be enabled if this is a public or shared
 computer.'''[[BR]]
 would be better.[[BR]]
 Or maybe even[[BR]]
 '''Gears should ''not'', however, be enabled if this is a public or shared
 computer.'''[[BR]]
 Not sure which is best...

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