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<dt style="float: left; width: 6em; font-weight: bold">Revision</dt> <dd><a style="font-weight: bold" href="https://core.trac.wordpress.org/changeset/43218">43218</a><script type="application/ld+json">{"@context":"http://schema.org","@type":"EmailMessage","description":"Review this Commit","action":{"@type":"ViewAction","url":"https://core.trac.wordpress.org/changeset/43218","name":"Review Commit"}}</script></dd>
<dt style="float: left; width: 6em; font-weight: bold">Author</dt> <dd>SergeyBiryukov</dd>
<dt style="float: left; width: 6em; font-weight: bold">Date</dt> <dd>2018-05-10 16:11:38 +0000 (Thu, 10 May 2018)</dd>
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<pre style='padding-left: 1em; margin: 2em 0; border-left: 2px solid #ccc; line-height: 1.25; font-size: 105%; font-family: sans-serif'>Privacy: Tweak Privacy Policy page intro text for clarity.
Props macbookandrew, allendav.
See <a href="https://core.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/43933">#43933</a>.</pre>
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<li><a href="#trunksrcwpadminprivacyphp">trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php</a></li>
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<span class="info" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px; color: #888">--- trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php 2018-05-10 16:03:15 UTC (rev 43217)
+++ trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php 2018-05-10 16:11:38 UTC (rev 43218)
</span><span class="lines" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px; color: #888">@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <p>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <?php _e( 'As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy policy.' ); ?>
</span><del style="background-color: #fdd; text-decoration:none; display:block; padding: 0 10px">- <?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
</del><ins style="background-color: #dfd; text-decoration:none; display:block; padding: 0 10px">+ <?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy policy page, please select it below. If not, please create one.' ); ?>
</ins><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> </p>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <p>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <?php _e( 'The new page will include help and suggestions for your privacy policy.' ); ?>
</span><span class="lines" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px; color: #888">@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy policy requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> </p>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <p>
</span><del style="background-color: #fdd; text-decoration:none; display:block; padding: 0 10px">- <?php _e( 'After your privacy policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it. On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your themes and plugins.' ); ?>
- <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after an update. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
</del><ins style="background-color: #dfd; text-decoration:none; display:block; padding: 0 10px">+ <?php _e( 'After your privacy policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
+ <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after installing or updating any themes or plugins. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
</ins><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> </p>
</span><span class="cx" style="display: block; padding: 0 10px"> <?php
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